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Read this draft of an essay about my daughter. I thought it would be an easy little story to write but it isn't. Let me know what you think. 1. This is a true story about my daughter that I want to tell. 2. I would try to make the scenes more clear so the reader can understand what things are happening on the video, what things are happening in my head and what things are happening as my family watches the video. 3. I guess my mentor text would be Anne Lamott's __Operating Instructions__. This is like my mentor text because it is a small, memoir-type story. This is unlike my mentor text because the video makes it complicated to tell and it is longer than what she includes in her short essays.