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This story is a fictionalization of the Two Inmates Escape news story. Revision Questions 1. My idea for this project comes from my first fictional story, where the jail scene is the best and from the two inmates escape news story. Some of it came from the book Newjack. 2. If I were to improve this I would add more detail and make it longer, yet keep the same outline. I feel some of the word choice and grammar can use some improvement. 3. This was like my mentor text in that two inmates escape, but it is told from a news and actually-there-point of view and, in the end the inmates are seen heading off together. This is also similar to my other mentor text in meshing the two types of view together. This is my first revision This is the next part of my story, it could be better but it sets up the next part I want to get into. This next part will go into military service during World War 3-which, for reference started in 2017, two years after the escape and three years before the events of part 2. Part 3 occurs in 2025-2032